8/12/2012

Soul

(Painting by Morris Louis, 1959)

ephemeral one
the force behind my heartbeat
my love, my life, you


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Written for Haiku Heights
and
by special request:
Haiku Friday

20 comments:

  1. So lovely. Wonderful to have someone who means so much.

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  2. smiles...love the sentiments in your verse...i can not see the image and i even refreshed a couple times...but i def think it must be of someone special by your verse...

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  3. This is so beautiful. It is so well written there is really nothing I can say about it. I just want to feel it and savour it. Thank you, Patti!

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  4. Patti, beautiful Haiku, Morris louis painting perfect with it. kp

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  5. Very beautiful dedication to that special person

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  6. If there was no love...
    We writers would never have born

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  7. Beautiful words of love ~ And the image is perfect too ~

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  8. Takes time and effort to build that- well done!

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  9. Wow Patticake, someone sure is lucky...:-)

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  10. Mmmm...powerfully put together.

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  11. Very much enjoyed this--says so much in very few words. Thank you for visiting mine, too.

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  12. Great to be appreciated, Patti!

    Hank

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  13. OMG I love this. Link in to Haiku Friday PLEASE?

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  14. I love this. I am still speechless.
    Mine is here
    Have you an AWESOME WEEK!
    hugs
    shakira

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