5/19/2012

Pine for Me

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forest whispers call
arms open wide in welcome
pines invite me in



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Written for Haiku Heights, where the prompt is "pine."

27 comments:

  1. Talking to the trees. I like it. The footpath looks inviting.

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  2. they invite me in as well...i love the woods and forest....

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  3. The verdant forest... just some place i would want to go! Well written :)
    Haven of solitude amongst rising thoughts

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  4. Yes, yes, yes.....haiku beautifully echoed the great photo......perfect

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  5. hey that's a lovely haiku..so simple yet so special..wanna go back to my childhood when dad would take us for long drives into the forest:)

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  6. feel included ~ inviting haiku ~ well done ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  7. the path is narrow
    always in ascending mode
    God's provocation

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  8. Patti, your excellent haikus are getting me hooked into a very bad habit, ya know?

    Love these short things!

    (Now, wait just a MINUTE!
    I didn't mean it like T H A T !)
    PEACE!!!

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  9. Lovely invitation...I can't resist its call too~

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  10. How the cool and shades beckon us to venture forth with nature. A cool write Patti!

    Hank

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  11. I really like this a lot, Patti, because I often feel when I wak into a forest that there is a silent, unspoken invitation from the trees. Very nice!

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  12. so simple yet so intriguing :0 loved it :)

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  13. So easy to be invited in. Lovely.

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  14. Very delightful and refreshing haiku Patti :) and a very beautiful invitation!

    Heart turned stone

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  15. You captured the serenity of a walk in the woods perfectly.

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  16. What a beautiful haiku. Perfect language!

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  17. It's a wonderful thing to be invited in by nature. Beautiful haiku. Appeals a great deal to the country girl in me.

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  18. Lovely 'Ku. And the photo, as well. They complement one another.

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  19. What a brilliant picture!,good :)

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  20. This leaves with with a lovely feeling.

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