"Be obscure clearly." ~E.B. White
A really passionate haiku!!!The happy hours countdown begins!
Awesome haiku written with the wonderful painting as an inspiration. Thank you for sharing.Namaste
Captures the emotion beautifully. (There is something about haikus that has always eluded me.)
Lovely shades of love, even beyond the grave ~
there is a really cool progression in this patti...love that second line...and your closing line too...
delightful romantic haiku and awesome photo ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
Very lovely, and goes with the picture so well.
very romanticspring haiku and tanka
It's a lovely, romantic haiku.
Shades of love, true love, are always the best. Such a romantic haiku. :)
I loved those shades...Beautifully penned :)
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These are cool...but I prefer your prose :(
Sometimes at night there is a feeling, almost indiscernible, relating to those who have walked the streets before me. I like to think that lovers who touched hands once always will. This is FAB, Patti!
a haiku so close to my heart. Nicely done.Someday Somewhere – Haiku Spring and Hour
super mysterious feel to the pic,,,,,great haiku
I love how much can be said in so few lines. I am sure you know how this strikes a chord with me Patti. Beautiful.
OK! You've made me want to fall in love...again. Sigh.
It's a good thing passion lives on. Lovely poem.Richard
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Mystery tied up in passion ~~ very nicely done! (ahhh ~~ sigh)Bewitching Hour
Stretching into a new venue is good for us all. I like your poetry. I like your prose. I like risks. Especially successful ones. This reminds me of stuff I have studied :). Nicely done! The second line is my favorite. Shades of lovers... YES!!!
A romantic and lovely haiku :)
Romantic and lovely haiku, great photo :)
what a atmospheric haiku.Round midnight. I can hear Chet on his trompet.Visit my haiku at: http://wwwdeliterator.blogspot.com/
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