3/04/2011

Nightfall


 awareness flickers
in the shadows angels call
end of day answers



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Written for Haiku Friday, hosted by LouCeeL



Posted by PattiKen
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10 comments:

  1. UnknownMarch 4, 2011 at 10:13 AM

    A perfect description of that edge we fall across as we go to sleep. Great Haiku. and thank you, Patti, for joining in.

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  2. Monkey ManMarch 4, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    ....or is it the big sleep? Regardless. I like.

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  3. Katherine KrigeMarch 4, 2011 at 11:39 AM

    That's pretty Patti. Delicate.

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  4. Tara R.March 4, 2011 at 12:12 PM

    This was lovely! Wonderful imagery.

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  5. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 4, 2011 at 2:46 PM

    Lovely! Both image and words.

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  6. Brian MillerMarch 4, 2011 at 3:37 PM

    nice...and just what does the end of day have to say?

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  7. Grandmother MaryMarch 4, 2011 at 3:59 PM

    I lke that "in the shadows angels call". Warm imagery.

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  8. AnonymousMarch 4, 2011 at 7:25 PM

    There's a softness to this, an all-encompassing quiet of spirit. I can hear the soft hiss and pop of the candle wick in the space between words, breaths.

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  9. JaniceMarch 4, 2011 at 10:22 PM

    Written in such beautiful simplicity. Nice.

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  10. JonasMarch 5, 2011 at 12:02 AM

    Call me Old Skool, but I love it when angels call.

    (wish they'd call more often)

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