3/04/2011

Nightfall


 awareness flickers
in the shadows angels call
end of day answers



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Written for Haiku Friday, hosted by LouCeeL



10 comments:

  1. A perfect description of that edge we fall across as we go to sleep. Great Haiku. and thank you, Patti, for joining in.

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  2. ....or is it the big sleep? Regardless. I like.

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  3. That's pretty Patti. Delicate.

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  4. This was lovely! Wonderful imagery.

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  5. nice...and just what does the end of day have to say?

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  6. I lke that "in the shadows angels call". Warm imagery.

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  7. There's a softness to this, an all-encompassing quiet of spirit. I can hear the soft hiss and pop of the candle wick in the space between words, breaths.

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  8. Written in such beautiful simplicity. Nice.

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  9. Call me Old Skool, but I love it when angels call.

    (wish they'd call more often)

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