"Be obscure clearly." ~E.B. White
A perfect description of that edge we fall across as we go to sleep. Great Haiku. and thank you, Patti, for joining in.
....or is it the big sleep? Regardless. I like.
That's pretty Patti. Delicate.
This was lovely! Wonderful imagery.
Lovely! Both image and words.
nice...and just what does the end of day have to say?
I lke that "in the shadows angels call". Warm imagery.
There's a softness to this, an all-encompassing quiet of spirit. I can hear the soft hiss and pop of the candle wick in the space between words, breaths.
Written in such beautiful simplicity. Nice.
Call me Old Skool, but I love it when angels call.(wish they'd call more often)
Thoughts? I would love to hear from you.