10/02/2012

Breakfast Under the Tum-Tum Tree

  Illustration from The Jabberwocky
by Lewis Carroll 1871


‘Twas brillig and the slithy toves did…

Oh, crap, who am I kidding?
‘Twasn’t brillig at all, not
on this very un-frabjous day, and
there is not one freaking slithy tove in sight.

Instead what's here is this giant bandersnatch
who galumphed in from the wabe
with no interest at all in the gyre and gimble
and one hell of a frumious appetite.

You thought the Jabberwock was bad?
Oh, man, you have no idea. The only uffish thought
this Bandersnatch has is – one two! one-two! – how to
ruin my day and steal my callooh, callay away.

Not today, big boy. I’m going back to bed.

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28 comments:

  1. Laughing like crazy here--wonderful take on the Lewis Carroll classic. I hate those frumious appetites.

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  2. so cool...love all the funny words...would love to hear you read this patti..

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  3. Made me smile.... and took my back to English class! Yep, some days you just want to go back to bed. :)

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  4. Hilarious - those darn Bandersnatch can ruin a girls day! K

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  5. Take heart, tomorrow is supposed to be mostly brillag with a 50% chance of slivy tove.

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  6. can i get a translator? smiles....def some fun words patti to play around with now if only i knew what it all meant...smiles..

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  7. How fun. This is Dr. Seuss for the adult.

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  8. Brilliant! Wish I'd written it! LOL

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  9. Lol...this is great! I love Alice in Wonderland.

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  10. A delightfully irreverant homage! Love it!

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  11. This is delightful!! and yes I would love to hear you read it!

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  12. quite a fun piece. I too would probably head back to bed than deal with such a creature.

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  13. What fun with the words! Patti! For the life of me I'm lost but enjoyed the whole episode!

    Hank

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  14. This is so fun Patti...I was trying to decipher the crazy words..he..he...Enjoyed this ~

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  15. sometimes you gotta jus go with the notion and flow of what the writer is trying to express...and i felt this...loved it...!

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  16. LOL... very clever. My first smile of the morning, thank you :)

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  17. I love everything in h]this one!Those funny words that he use. Great work!
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  18. This made me smile this morning...what a great parody!

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  19. I got a real kick out of this. Too clever!

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  20. Fabulous! What a wonderful write! Very entertaining!

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  21. Witty and well done. Oh. And bandersnatch ... isn't that the female of the banderkoch?

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  22. This is awesome! I just finished Alice in Wonderland with my daughter. I need to share this with her.

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  23. One of my favorite poems. Carroll would be proud of what you did here.

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  24. Hahaha. I love this. Very clever. You must have been channeling Lewis Carroll. Brilliant!

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  25. Sounds like that was a good call my friend - but I think you nailed it anyway!

    Oh, and I suspect that elusive muse has returned... ;)

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