11/03/2011

Echoes


beneath the waning
lie echoes of the young
heart beating, thrumming
with yearning, passion
once strong and heady, now
gone the way of the forgotten
green shoots of promise.

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Happy Recipient of The Everyday Goddess'

Goddess Award


13 comments:

Monkey Man said...

Love the flow and emotion.

LceeL said...

Yeah, I know how that feels. You said it better than I ever could.

Brian Miller said...

no, come back green shoot promises...smiles...hear your echoes patti

Ella said...

Just beautiful! I love your take on the prompt~

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love this, Patti! So well done!

Isabel Doyle said...

Autumn is not the season of decay - a different blooming maybe --

beautiful lines

rch said...

Excellent picture and I love the balance between finality and redemption in your words.

Laurie Kolp said...

Absolutely divine.

G-Man said...

Growing old poetically, with PattiCake!!

PattiKen said...

Thank you for all your kind comments. I really appreciate them, and you.

Everyday Goddess said...

beautiful image and words!

i gave you one of my weekly goddess awards if you would like it for your sidebar.

in joy,
elise

Janice said...

So beautifully written. Lovely photo as well.

zongrik said...

forgotten
green shoots of promise -> forgotten only till we wake again after the long winter, then we'll remember once more.