12/13/2010

I Am


I am passion
Kindled with suggestion
Ignited by desire.

I am conception
Formed by combustion
Building toward completion.

I am creation
Delivering new hope
Packaged as love.

I am you.

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This is my offering for One Shot Wednesday.


27 comments:

  1. YOU! ARE GREAT... and those words came into my heart just as your purpose was

    Loved this Patti!!

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  2. It's what happens. Creation delivers new hope packaged as love in the opinion that the world should go on and there we are! You write beautifully, Patti. Happy Holidays to you and your family.

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  3. smiles. i could use a bit of that...can you pass some over...

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  4. You certainly have a way with words. This was fabulous! Great pic choice, too!

    (now, if Christine O'Donnell was as half as clever as you are with words, she might have gotten a few more votes ... ;-)

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  5. I'm thinking an explosive combo

    nicely worded sequence of events

    nicely aimed at One Shot

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  6. I am reading
    your words & the comments
    wanting to love this,
    I am

    I am trying
    today I am stretching,
    but this not my favourite of yours
    I fear.

    I will be back though, as your quality always strikes me, even when it is not my fav
    Katherine

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  7. "I am passion" wow I love that line...passion it is us all...why we live, it is our conception....you have ignited my thinking Patti...thank you...bkm

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  8. Oh.. what a beauty! I love the progression in the poem!
    From passion to conception to creation... very beautifully done, Patti!
    I am impressed! :)

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  9. The ending is powerful and spiritual -- very wise words,

    joanny

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  10. This is a very beautiful ice crystal of a poem. All the emotions so powerfully stated in so few words.

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  11. Powerful piece!

    Great writing :)

    cheers

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  12. It is so beautifully expressed. Its simplicity enhances it.

    places

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  13. I am you.

    that sums it all Patti.right to my heart it goes..:)
    EPIC..!

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  14. I accurately guessed what the end-stanza was going to be (no, that's not a criticism, I just read A LOT of poetry), and I still enjoyed the journey to it. Good writing.

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  15. Beautiful, strong and affirming of all that is good. Well done!

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  16. We're aall wonderful, let's have a party!

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  17. Great write, Patti. Literally echoes the very lines in being kindled with suggestion, concept, and creative intent.

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  18. Everyone, thanks for your visit and comments. I love seeing you all here. And I'' second KB's comment. We're all wonderful, so let's party!

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  19. This is beautiful, Patti. To me, it's so very romantic on one level, and profoundly spiritual on another. I love it. :)

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  20. Simply beautiful, Patti, both poem and photo. Nice work.

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  21. A lovely and generous verse-- nicely done! I'm reading further, but won't comment again as it is just maddening to jump through the sign-in hoops, sorry.

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