tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post5659258661905252151..comments2024-03-19T03:27:24.739-04:00Comments on PattiKen and the Muses: Invisible - Part 9PattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-10159712393958410962020-02-21T03:44:16.525-05:002020-02-21T03:44:16.525-05:00that was very sweet, and fun to read. Nice workthat was very sweet, and fun to read. Nice workTomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10948978798395906663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-81727362315185198252020-02-17T19:25:45.315-05:002020-02-17T19:25:45.315-05:00I noticed that, actually... your contents bar jump...I noticed that, actually... your contents bar jumps from 2017 to 2020!<br /><br />Surprised me that it's been that long, actually... I figured 2018, at the most.JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-30351754494214460232020-02-17T16:01:28.809-05:002020-02-17T16:01:28.809-05:00OK. Titles entered. Thanks for the edits throughou...OK. Titles entered. Thanks for the edits throughout. All fixed. This was hard. It's the first time I've written in 3 years.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-57353664095899635532020-02-17T14:12:20.781-05:002020-02-17T14:12:20.781-05:00So, chapter 8 should be called "Musings"...So, chapter 8 should be called "Musings" and chapter 9 should be "Meetings."<br /><br />I can see the dust being shaken off, as well as the frustration from writing the first two chapters and the last two, but now that the kinks are coming out, keep going! <br /><br />Second section, ninth paragraph: "Apparently, people who (are/live) alone tend to be depressed"<br /><br />A few paragraphs later: "I know HOW abrupt this must seem but believe me"JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.com