tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post8295010339652914034..comments2024-03-19T03:27:24.739-04:00Comments on PattiKen and the Muses: Waiting No MorePattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-9061207561889711702010-11-08T20:15:26.574-05:002010-11-08T20:15:26.574-05:00This one grabs my heart and won't let go. Tend...This one grabs my heart and won't let go. Tender and fierce, all at once, this reminder that here and now is, well, now.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-28539230835560799052010-11-08T19:13:44.083-05:002010-11-08T19:13:44.083-05:00A very beautiful poem. A reminder how precious we ...A very beautiful poem. A reminder how precious we all are.<br /><br />I feel that way about my husband too. And one day one of us will go to say something and remember the other is gone.Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-5174075155900171242010-11-06T17:42:42.123-04:002010-11-06T17:42:42.123-04:00beautiful in every waybeautiful in every wayWhitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-57573660047098072242010-11-05T17:53:22.347-04:002010-11-05T17:53:22.347-04:00This is gorgeous and heartbreaking!This is gorgeous and heartbreaking!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-19982125120329042752010-11-04T19:26:25.583-04:002010-11-04T19:26:25.583-04:00Full of heartache and the verge of acceptance. Sad...Full of heartache and the verge of acceptance. Sad but beautiful-- nicely done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-44080907361105377242010-11-04T13:43:08.172-04:002010-11-04T13:43:08.172-04:00The gift that is illustrated and embodied in the c...The gift that is illustrated and embodied in the companionship is wonderful. So often we forget to appreciate what another brings into our life. You capture it well here.The Exceptionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13758654167029552230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-11435803597074694762010-11-04T12:19:17.163-04:002010-11-04T12:19:17.163-04:00Oh... So beautiful and sad. It's weird, as I ...Oh... So beautiful and sad. It's weird, as I was reading it, I was thinking how hard it is for me to picture having someone in my life. I'm glad you share your view of real love and that you have had that in your life! Thanks for sharing!awitchtryinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09626760512365562043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-2263664688313085372010-11-04T05:05:25.314-04:002010-11-04T05:05:25.314-04:00Perfect!Perfect!JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-53903770016927685122010-11-03T23:34:26.554-04:002010-11-03T23:34:26.554-04:00what a beautiful verse so full of love. That paint...what a beautiful verse so full of love. That paints true love and is enough to make anyone's heart ache.Katherine Krigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737873330498032718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-32635631336767581852010-11-03T23:18:11.369-04:002010-11-03T23:18:11.369-04:00Thank you, Everyone, for your visits and comments....Thank you, Everyone, for your visits and comments. I wish I could reply to each of you individually, but then I wouldn't have had time to read as many of your posts. Selfishly, that was no contest. ;-)PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-42598682280202613462010-11-03T18:31:40.383-04:002010-11-03T18:31:40.383-04:00Solid use of repetition/structure and sensory info...Solid use of repetition/structure and sensory info.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-4079781443824134102010-11-03T17:35:06.791-04:002010-11-03T17:35:06.791-04:00Absolutely great, every line.Absolutely great, every line.Everyday Goddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00486528297252417282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-41616493106293499242010-11-03T15:30:27.775-04:002010-11-03T15:30:27.775-04:00All I can picture is nothing -- oh how this resona...All I can picture is nothing -- oh how this resonates with me.<br /><br />Beautiful, Patti. Thank you.Belindahttp://thehalfwaypoint.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-9719070860770959582010-11-03T10:19:46.023-04:002010-11-03T10:19:46.023-04:00Beautiful! The repeated refrain (sitting in this ...Beautiful! The repeated refrain (sitting in this chair..) works very, very well....a chain of sentiment and remembrance.<br /><br />Lady NyoAsobimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15661326504398833746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-28618229084662988732010-11-03T09:54:38.060-04:002010-11-03T09:54:38.060-04:00I love how you took a cold waiting room and made i...I love how you took a cold waiting room and made it warm, human, real, like the part of your life that "came to life" just by knowing another. And the end suggests both a celebration and a tragedy. My heart was touched. Beautiful poem. :)Melissa Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16024400805290277282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-86036169476113453762010-11-03T09:52:33.596-04:002010-11-03T09:52:33.596-04:00You write like I feel. Twins. I'm so glad I&...You write like I feel. Twins. I'm so glad I've come to know you.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-29219923326223550762010-11-03T09:28:17.641-04:002010-11-03T09:28:17.641-04:00Best to dwell in the present and enjoy the memorie...Best to dwell in the present and enjoy the memories. Thanks for sharing them with us!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-63150492063368393702010-11-03T09:01:13.684-04:002010-11-03T09:01:13.684-04:00People come for a reason into our lives... but we ...People come for a reason into our lives... but we sometimes are not ready to let go and grow up... nice poem...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-89956921138484865592010-11-03T07:38:06.901-04:002010-11-03T07:38:06.901-04:00This is astounding, awesome LOVE for the partner.....This is astounding, awesome LOVE for the partner.. Oh so much that without him nothing would remain.<br />Lucky you lucky him for having you sitting there...Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-72415707447252586132010-11-03T06:39:18.210-04:002010-11-03T06:39:18.210-04:00that was a wonderful write patty...that hits home ...that was a wonderful write patty...that hits home with such a powerful ending...thanks for sharing..peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-73351930141474124972010-11-03T05:48:00.046-04:002010-11-03T05:48:00.046-04:00haunting, and beautifully writtenhaunting, and beautifully writtenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-20898202749345234252010-11-03T01:08:28.849-04:002010-11-03T01:08:28.849-04:00An ideal relationship...nice...I hope this is some...An ideal relationship...nice...I hope this is something you have been lucky enough to personally experience.Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10882248671520480556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-65830304305316805842010-11-03T00:23:58.292-04:002010-11-03T00:23:58.292-04:00A beautifully moving poem - I love that your partn...A beautifully moving poem - I love that your partner "turned the lights on". The fullness of relationship is so lovingly expressed here. A quite wonderful thing to read for us romantics:)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-29108680135764799162010-11-02T23:29:10.150-04:002010-11-02T23:29:10.150-04:00The powerful overwhelming view from love... nostal...The powerful overwhelming view from love... nostalgic piece well done.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-30343566539891762412010-11-02T23:00:27.088-04:002010-11-02T23:00:27.088-04:00"All I can picture is nothing..." what a..."All I can picture is nothing..." what a powerful way to end the verse... Its nostalgic and sad... I relate to this very much...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya <br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay <br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.com