tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post7034906417740480044..comments2024-03-19T03:27:24.739-04:00Comments on PattiKen and the Muses: Metamorphosis (Part 3)PattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-57697829797716778522011-10-20T21:48:01.265-04:002011-10-20T21:48:01.265-04:00Just played catch up and now I am dying for the ne...Just played catch up and now I am dying for the next installment. I love your short stories Patti! Who dun it!Katherine Krigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737873330498032718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-20238318874514982252011-10-12T18:59:45.322-04:002011-10-12T18:59:45.322-04:00Ohhh a cliffhanger! The agony!Ohhh a cliffhanger! The agony!Siobhanhttp://www.siobhanlikessocks.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-25312062284665284982011-10-12T17:18:43.523-04:002011-10-12T17:18:43.523-04:00I'm not gonna mention what that word verificat...I'm not gonna mention what <i>that</i> word verification was... let it be known, however, that google is getting DIRTY.JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-76386792520471726522011-10-12T17:18:08.630-04:002011-10-12T17:18:08.630-04:00Whoa-ho!
Kk. I'm in, the story's good, an...Whoa-ho!<br /><br />Kk. I'm in, the story's good, and Marty's a good character. I've decided that I do love the 2010s/1940s tonal amalgamation (if that makes sense) you have in this series, but there's something nagging me about it. I'll figure it out.<br /><br />Very nice. Love the business card. ;)JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-76312892576024536952011-10-12T15:51:01.340-04:002011-10-12T15:51:01.340-04:00mmmm? Continued w/ 10th? -Jmmmm? Continued w/ 10th? -JHarnett-Hargrovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07486168670308150669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-41925630873684239382011-10-12T07:26:39.769-04:002011-10-12T07:26:39.769-04:00I'm all in! And waiting for more. You've g...I'm all in! And waiting for more. You've got the dialogue right and the plot is familiar but fresh.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-1044140591031737762011-10-12T06:11:31.368-04:002011-10-12T06:11:31.368-04:00nuts.
I think you've got something here...loo...nuts. <br />I think you've got something here...looking forward to the conclusionTomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10948978798395906663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-32087218880091394312011-10-12T00:15:19.558-04:002011-10-12T00:15:19.558-04:00Enjoyed the unfolding and easy conversation betwee...Enjoyed the unfolding and easy conversation between the two ex lovers but I still think she's going to be Trouble... I think she should be!<br /><br /> <br /><br />edits: <br /><br />quotation mark “Not taking her eyes...<br /><br />“Was the front door was locked...Bimbimbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12427788003822538655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-23455813189957826582011-10-12T00:01:04.809-04:002011-10-12T00:01:04.809-04:00This is good! I spent a quarter on detective ficti...This is good! I spent a quarter on detective fiction last year. I like your spin on it!Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-80639225557016585672011-10-11T20:28:21.844-04:002011-10-11T20:28:21.844-04:00Continue! Please, please do continue... the amount...Continue! Please, please do continue... the amount of detail you pack into this triple-shot was enough to make me slow down and savor every word. Just like a fine espresso.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-55826147551482991712011-10-11T15:33:51.878-04:002011-10-11T15:33:51.878-04:00Aww such a shame you didn't have time to finis...Aww such a shame you didn't have time to finish it but it's well written and a cliff hanger. You're descriptions are awesome, really feel like I'm there. Don't do a Jeffscape and make us wait too long for the conclusion!Bainohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14156193098088048637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-67259390482963531512011-10-11T12:56:24.175-04:002011-10-11T12:56:24.175-04:00Ever since childhood I have not enjoyed 'seria...Ever since childhood I have not enjoyed 'serials'...I need the whole book, and WILL buy it! Ask others on here, I do buy their written stuff. SOMETIMES! grin!<br /><br />(Note: I also did not want one shot of bourbon at a time--give me the whole bottle--or let me cry--dry--and alone!)<br /><br />Thanks SO much for visiting me (blog)!<br /><br />I'll read this when on the road this week.<br />Thank you, girl!<br />PEACE!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-29726533425378439502011-10-11T10:27:17.925-04:002011-10-11T10:27:17.925-04:00Read through all 3 parts so far, loving this story...Read through all 3 parts so far, loving this story. Well paced, good backstory, intriguing plot... I'm with Lou, great start on a book.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-33749433241667225172011-10-11T09:18:39.937-04:002011-10-11T09:18:39.937-04:00This is the start of an EXCELLENT book.This is the start of an EXCELLENT book.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-5208624996601087902011-10-10T22:13:19.099-04:002011-10-10T22:13:19.099-04:00So good...I'm ready for more.So good...I'm ready for more.Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10882248671520480556noreply@blogger.com