tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post6165216621559377636..comments2024-03-19T03:27:24.739-04:00Comments on PattiKen and the Muses: A Dame with a Past - Part 4PattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-23326655705145885412014-02-19T17:56:53.272-05:002014-02-19T17:56:53.272-05:00I will say that there is a lack of economy to this...I will say that there is a lack of economy to this style, a reliance on the obvious, and quite a bit of unnecessary repetition. One of your gifts as a writer is your ability to infer... It's a PI tale... inferring would suit this nicely.<br /><br />But... the game's now afoot! ;)JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-18216051768967722722014-02-18T15:07:18.384-05:002014-02-18T15:07:18.384-05:00I like it - and following with the muses. :)
I like it - and following with the muses. :)<br />Tomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10948978798395906663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-83999551301929976602014-02-16T19:44:33.151-05:002014-02-16T19:44:33.151-05:00Now we're moving along. Perhaps a little repet...Now we're moving along. Perhaps a little repetitive but I guess they needed to fill Harry in.<br />Bainohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14156193098088048637noreply@blogger.com