tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post5304159872927313731..comments2024-03-19T03:27:24.739-04:00Comments on PattiKen and the Muses: 4 A Legacy of Smoke and Shadow: SagittariusPattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-12677474490026771482012-02-23T19:44:07.221-05:002012-02-23T19:44:07.221-05:00Loved the last paragraphLoved the last paragraphSiobhanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11779857279589752790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-17782719952849918082012-02-21T15:59:32.079-05:002012-02-21T15:59:32.079-05:00Patti, this reads like a novel!Patti, this reads like a novel!Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-55484991131519407322012-02-20T01:58:01.305-05:002012-02-20T01:58:01.305-05:00Honestly, I love that you went dialog-heavy, but I...Honestly, I <i>love</i> that you went dialog-heavy, but I kinda missed your description. Hah!JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-73581190217419185912012-02-11T21:45:18.364-05:002012-02-11T21:45:18.364-05:00This is great!This is great!Come At Me Brohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12471756942136977057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-37410252690000484592012-02-09T23:21:58.256-05:002012-02-09T23:21:58.256-05:00i would def agree with lou...this is such a fun pi...i would def agree with lou...this is such a fun piece to read patti...and loving the progression of it...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-86420264660427049252012-02-09T11:07:41.508-05:002012-02-09T11:07:41.508-05:00Thanks, Lou. Fixed.Thanks, Lou. Fixed.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-52171307180705123462012-02-09T09:48:24.799-05:002012-02-09T09:48:24.799-05:00"he suspected he in trouble." At lunch?..."he suspected he in trouble." At lunch? I think there's a missing word there.<br /><br />This is a really well crafted story. To my mind, this is some of your best writing yet.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.com