tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post4774097320774665512..comments2024-03-19T03:27:24.739-04:00Comments on PattiKen and the Muses: One Night StandPattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comBlogger38125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-51166843985692046302011-03-03T05:19:21.789-05:002011-03-03T05:19:21.789-05:00Now that's got to be a gift: the ability to ma...Now that's got to be a gift: the ability to make Jack seem sensuous. Bravo!JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-17399539580668312312011-02-05T12:15:41.893-05:002011-02-05T12:15:41.893-05:00Talk about a stormy relationship.Talk about a stormy relationship.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-44015737195354156822011-02-05T00:05:43.476-05:002011-02-05T00:05:43.476-05:00Thank you all for your visits and comments. I like...Thank you all for your visits and comments. I like comments. This is me, smiling. :-)PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-23258668318818649752011-02-04T19:57:26.975-05:002011-02-04T19:57:26.975-05:00Wonderful use of scenes, solid flow.Wonderful use of scenes, solid flow.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-60580355340545296622011-02-04T14:24:12.341-05:002011-02-04T14:24:12.341-05:00That was amazing. Love the layers of meaning. Br...That was amazing. Love the layers of meaning. Brilliant! I'm trying to read your 10thDOM muse 0...and I got an error message that it didn't exist...what's up? I also want to thank you for all your visits at Life is Good. Your support means a lot to me.Tinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08925730745204736744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-38359498603421022602011-02-03T15:37:54.353-05:002011-02-03T15:37:54.353-05:00loved it, so vivid and well writtenloved it, so vivid and well writtenJhpoetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02745726173641549524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-17798226870238886192011-02-03T10:41:15.510-05:002011-02-03T10:41:15.510-05:00sounds like winter to me! Nice :)sounds like winter to me! Nice :)Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-55447303288104181962011-02-03T07:28:41.216-05:002011-02-03T07:28:41.216-05:00Evocative, fun, well done!Evocative, fun, well done!Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-63738316322676341802011-02-03T01:38:11.496-05:002011-02-03T01:38:11.496-05:00A beautiful and sensuous verse with the imagery so...A beautiful and sensuous verse with the imagery so vivid that i could almost feel it real..I enjoyed it so much...<br />Thanks<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-28911536491340021652011-02-02T22:49:54.534-05:002011-02-02T22:49:54.534-05:00Wonderful, sensual piece. She must watch out for ...Wonderful, sensual piece. She must watch out for those bad boys... not the ones mom would want to see slip by.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-89102030510921527312011-02-02T22:12:37.235-05:002011-02-02T22:12:37.235-05:00Good stuff!Good stuff!KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-78192462397370324222011-02-02T16:43:50.370-05:002011-02-02T16:43:50.370-05:00Burr....loved it :)Burr....loved it :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-30579071181902557272011-02-02T13:19:47.107-05:002011-02-02T13:19:47.107-05:00This is excellent!This is excellent!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-13505620524053927662011-02-02T13:06:10.513-05:002011-02-02T13:06:10.513-05:00I used to feel good about cool jazz. Now I'm n...I used to feel good about cool jazz. Now I'm not so sure. Nice work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-68033667199563072382011-02-02T11:43:07.467-05:002011-02-02T11:43:07.467-05:00Oh so clever my friend! Like so many poems and sho...Oh so clever my friend! Like so many poems and short stories you left us with a chilling ending and then touched it off so nicely with a hot shower.<br /><br />Reminded me so much of Jill Summers...always left abruptly, driving me to a cold shower!<br /><br />Your imagination is rich, full and vivid and you bring so much to Wednesday...and indeed to every day. Thanks Patti, your poetry is always a pleasure to read...beautiful and special.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-17232836309147617652011-02-02T11:29:30.688-05:002011-02-02T11:29:30.688-05:00a double meaning going on here that was superbly c...a double meaning going on here that was superbly crafted...great poem...peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-12703345201141892252011-02-02T10:53:57.374-05:002011-02-02T10:53:57.374-05:00Wonderfully put...
tears of the sky fall to the g...Wonderfully put...<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/02/tears-of-sky-fall-to-ground.html" rel="nofollow">tears of the sky fall to the ground</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-82282561291020442412011-02-02T10:25:51.664-05:002011-02-02T10:25:51.664-05:00What a delightful tribute to all the bad boys of t...What a delightful tribute to all the bad boys of the world! I've known a few of those "starving polar bears."Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10882248671520480556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-55346434850178867852011-02-02T09:44:10.175-05:002011-02-02T09:44:10.175-05:00OOO His chill warms me to the bone !
Great write P...OOO His chill warms me to the bone !<br />Great write Patti !JL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-70279735218567142432011-02-02T08:27:48.688-05:002011-02-02T08:27:48.688-05:00Love the imagery in this, really good.Love the imagery in this, really good.Teresahttp://teresagoncalves.tumblr.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-7069619755394915452011-02-02T06:16:39.089-05:002011-02-02T06:16:39.089-05:00extracting heat from the cold...uhhh, cool piece
...extracting heat from the cold...uhhh, cool piece<br /><br />Peace, hpknot eyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14238403848734436106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-3496308166377805972011-02-02T05:42:50.028-05:002011-02-02T05:42:50.028-05:00Oh yeah. Got me one of those petulant poppets. Tim...Oh yeah. Got me one of those petulant poppets. Time to turn up the heat.Bainohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14156193098088048637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-85446917604088547822011-02-02T03:18:41.604-05:002011-02-02T03:18:41.604-05:00Gosh... I got just one word for this, lady... B.R....Gosh... I got just one word for this, lady... B.R.I.L.L.I.A.N.T! <br />Despite the meanness of Mr. Jack, this one sure got a huge smile on my face... your personification of the chill factor was super fantastic, Patti!! Loved it!! <br />I had written a poem with the same title some months back... read it if you feel like :))<br /><br />[umm..by the way, I am currently spending some "quality" time with Jack.. I bet it's the same guy ;-).. Now I know what to expect though]Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-67095997402001958022011-02-02T02:36:32.756-05:002011-02-02T02:36:32.756-05:00Very clever m'dear. I always loved how your wr...Very clever m'dear. I always loved how your writing is shot through with mischievous humor. :)Velvet Verbosityhttp://www.velvetverbosity.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-62771784368243970332011-02-02T02:26:54.967-05:002011-02-02T02:26:54.967-05:00The very picturistic portrayal of the sequence is ...The very picturistic portrayal of the sequence is thrilling. Nice one night stand.Nithin RShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04210200269352572628noreply@blogger.com