tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post454743258995911888..comments2024-03-19T03:27:24.739-04:00Comments on PattiKen and the Muses: A Dame with a Past - Part 2PattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-36744292490849653672014-02-19T17:38:20.734-05:002014-02-19T17:38:20.734-05:00I admire the detail, but this chapter suffers from...I admire the detail, but this chapter suffers from far too much exposition. It suffocates what little drama there is.JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-29523443619538504042014-02-16T19:28:26.653-05:002014-02-16T19:28:26.653-05:00Wow. Such attention to detail. And pretty long cha...Wow. Such attention to detail. And pretty long chapter. Intrigue continues.Bainohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14156193098088048637noreply@blogger.com