tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post2704443607278883110..comments2024-03-19T03:27:24.739-04:00Comments on PattiKen and the Muses: The Theatre of YouPattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-50388161395481187022011-03-05T01:36:59.241-05:002011-03-05T01:36:59.241-05:00A compelling poetry and your words in the beginnin...A compelling poetry and your words in the beginning got me hooked... <br />'you believe yourself invisible<br />behind the brocade of your poetry. '<br />how true.. your ending was perfect too.<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-winter-dew.html<br />Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-17863984146044241612011-03-03T09:58:11.194-05:002011-03-03T09:58:11.194-05:00yep - i prefer "my" poets broken and rea...yep - i prefer "my" poets broken and real..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-22820203160822469792011-03-03T05:13:11.698-05:002011-03-03T05:13:11.698-05:00Wow! "revealing the actor who has not lived a...Wow! "revealing the actor who has not lived at all" ... blunt ... extremely well done verse, Patti.<br /><br />Bet you think I forgot about. Nope! Just for weeks in bed followed by two weeks of birthday celebrations. <br /><br />Catching up now. Hope all is well with you and yours.JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-11976138713812271172011-03-02T23:25:09.352-05:002011-03-02T23:25:09.352-05:00Excellent Patti...and an actor like many that did ...Excellent Patti...and an actor like many that did not live at all....wonderful work and good to see you back...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-91073354740653819362011-03-02T17:41:25.849-05:002011-03-02T17:41:25.849-05:00Masterfully wrought work. Excellent use of tradit...Masterfully wrought work. Excellent use of traditional - for me - structure, with a good pseudo-end-twist.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-74984571452931651352011-03-02T13:41:55.818-05:002011-03-02T13:41:55.818-05:00this is excellent....this is excellent....Marshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-1935150238768581222011-03-02T11:59:14.960-05:002011-03-02T11:59:14.960-05:00We are never invisible behind the brocade of our p...We are never invisible behind the brocade of our poetry. We will always be revealed as the actor who has not lived at all. This is dynamite!Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-42685192480652833902011-03-02T09:34:52.525-05:002011-03-02T09:34:52.525-05:00Snap! A real zinger here! You've described pre...Snap! A real zinger here! You've described precisely what disappoints me whenever I read something by a "poet" who fails to live fully.Ami Mattisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391930163467566669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-59806790527897449572011-03-02T07:05:09.425-05:002011-03-02T07:05:09.425-05:00"and the spotlight shines brighter on your st..."and the spotlight shines brighter on your stage, <br />revealing the actor who has not lived at all..."<br /><br />what a powerful ending to a compelling poem! you have a way of reaching deep down into the heart and bringing the dross to the surface...so well done again my friend! sometimes poetry, like life, hurts.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-30801694591057478052011-03-02T05:06:55.785-05:002011-03-02T05:06:55.785-05:00Oh yeaa!! When it's not from the heart, it'...Oh yeaa!! When it's not from the heart, it's just too fake to be called poetry! <br />Blunt and direct - I liked this a lot, Patti!! And I share your sentiment!<br /><br />Have been missing you for a while now, my friend... and am GLAD to see you back with a bang!!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-49640673402905725362011-03-02T02:44:33.692-05:002011-03-02T02:44:33.692-05:00Definitely to be guarded against. Great, hard hitt...Definitely to be guarded against. Great, hard hitting words.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-76029300218448208692011-03-02T01:29:24.544-05:002011-03-02T01:29:24.544-05:00Well done. You've described every thinking poe...Well done. You've described every thinking poet's worst nightmare.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-75657842232925017992011-03-01T23:05:13.343-05:002011-03-01T23:05:13.343-05:00Wow. Loved it! :)Wow. Loved it! :)Bradley Howingtonhttp://bradleyhowington.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-18280182240867521902011-03-01T22:32:01.310-05:002011-03-01T22:32:01.310-05:00Oh, those facades...Oh, those facades...Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10882248671520480556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-55258688952758421222011-03-01T22:17:23.445-05:002011-03-01T22:17:23.445-05:00Wow.
True, my friend. Though if some can write wi...Wow. <br />True, my friend. Though if some can write without the feeling, is it always bad. I know that the truth behind the words can be felt and makes for better prose, but not always. <br /><br />You sound miffed my friend. Pretty sure there is real life behind this one.Katherine Krigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737873330498032718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-56543818837061449582011-03-01T22:15:19.873-05:002011-03-01T22:15:19.873-05:00i dont want to be that guy...well not always...too...i dont want to be that guy...well not always...too much living to do...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-69480751797366118162011-03-01T21:26:13.220-05:002011-03-01T21:26:13.220-05:00Ha! I know this guy, well all of them!Ha! I know this guy, well all of them!Bainohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14156193098088048637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-56197405675542926582011-03-01T21:12:04.300-05:002011-03-01T21:12:04.300-05:00Nicely done Patti.Nicely done Patti.KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-7728838632172852482011-03-01T19:48:37.867-05:002011-03-01T19:48:37.867-05:00Superficial verse pales in the face of ferocious e...Superficial verse pales in the face of ferocious eloquence.Mxwllhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17011230822221784439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-33684484693315542212011-03-01T19:03:27.563-05:002011-03-01T19:03:27.563-05:00Cataclysmic, decisive literary smackdown.
Holy cr...Cataclysmic, decisive literary smackdown.<br /><br />Holy crap.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-73425162724783711352011-03-01T19:00:34.973-05:002011-03-01T19:00:34.973-05:00whoosh. wow. tell it like it is.whoosh. wow. tell it like it is.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.com