tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post2466187705638773875..comments2024-03-19T03:27:24.739-04:00Comments on PattiKen and the Muses: The RoadPattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-67674415449469495122013-02-09T16:49:20.845-05:002013-02-09T16:49:20.845-05:00Love this Patti. Love, love love your message. And...Love this Patti. Love, love love your message. And the reminder to keep letting kids be kids. ♥Katherine Krigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737873330498032718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-12302127194048121582013-01-24T14:41:52.880-05:002013-01-24T14:41:52.880-05:00Hi Patti - it's been a while since I pushed my...Hi Patti - it's been a while since I pushed my nose out into blogyland ...<br /><br />you make the reader feel the loving concern each has for the other. <br /><br />Bimbimbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12427788003822538655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-19208208478703952542013-01-20T22:55:44.908-05:002013-01-20T22:55:44.908-05:00This is awesome. Great job. Great voice. Great lan...This is awesome. Great job. Great voice. Great language.jasmine calyxhttp://jasminecalyx.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-331221752648482402013-01-20T20:35:34.440-05:002013-01-20T20:35:34.440-05:00This leaves me cheering hard for the girl. And th...This leaves me cheering hard for the girl. And the mama.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-77690367109860372472013-01-20T20:23:05.675-05:002013-01-20T20:23:05.675-05:00Very sweet and haunting! Beautiful poem.Very sweet and haunting! Beautiful poem.Tessahttp://www.finallyawriter.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-60207923876478264342013-01-20T15:54:50.695-05:002013-01-20T15:54:50.695-05:00so much said in so few words, very niceso much said in so few words, very niceAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17928057705247710612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-79022453598091837562013-01-20T12:40:06.811-05:002013-01-20T12:40:06.811-05:00Great insight of lifeGreat insight of lifeAnjum Wasim Darhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01252859337697790445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-41477083104179595382013-01-20T10:20:50.318-05:002013-01-20T10:20:50.318-05:00A mother's love makes her worry for her child ...A mother's love makes her worry for her child -always,even when the child has become an adult:-)<br /><br />Lovely sentiments & I liked the way Amelia reassures her Mom-am sure she will grow up to be a fine young woman & make her Mom proud:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-57666010239405049122013-01-20T08:31:52.156-05:002013-01-20T08:31:52.156-05:00Interesting characters created with so few words. ...Interesting characters created with so few words. Nicely done. lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-1751442866253377592013-01-20T01:48:38.305-05:002013-01-20T01:48:38.305-05:00Love the connection you created through mother'...Love the connection you created through mother's eyes. And the last line says so much about the girl's positive attitude. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-63235919983839322192013-01-20T00:26:52.737-05:002013-01-20T00:26:52.737-05:00Hope in the midst of poverty. I like this.Hope in the midst of poverty. I like this.dontpanic2011https://www.blogger.com/profile/03748395349482914590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-39565153702663836202013-01-19T20:00:40.129-05:002013-01-19T20:00:40.129-05:00Well done. Makes me want to read more. :)Well done. Makes me want to read more. :)Cherylhttp://burningfireshutinmybones.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-35999204633448524412013-01-19T17:14:10.352-05:002013-01-19T17:14:10.352-05:00Terrific words.Terrific words.Bohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05985370927609164513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-48421833899640486182013-01-19T16:12:22.839-05:002013-01-19T16:12:22.839-05:00A sharp little girl, isn't she? :)A sharp little girl, isn't she? :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-28649375765439482672013-01-19T14:18:31.970-05:002013-01-19T14:18:31.970-05:00Beautifully done!Beautifully done!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-40989508070320408252013-01-19T14:16:29.207-05:002013-01-19T14:16:29.207-05:00Hopefully the road leads to better place than the ...Hopefully the road leads to better place than the one she's growing up in.Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391186958774991367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-85159316275724716542013-01-19T13:38:20.090-05:002013-01-19T13:38:20.090-05:00Isn't that always the way...Isn't that always the way...kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-59750628178483649762013-01-19T10:46:47.182-05:002013-01-19T10:46:47.182-05:00You've managed to say so much in so few words....You've managed to say so much in so few words. Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10882248671520480556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-14124199371052140372013-01-19T05:32:05.450-05:002013-01-19T05:32:05.450-05:00I love this poem! It tells so much about the littl...I love this poem! It tells so much about the little girl! It fits the picture so well!SugarHighDDhttp://sugarhighdd.wordpress.com/2013/01/18/trifextra-week-51/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-5317136830449947052013-01-18T23:58:08.262-05:002013-01-18T23:58:08.262-05:00I like the story you created, looking through her ...I like the story you created, looking through her mother's eyes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-40284616979395261552013-01-18T23:06:13.039-05:002013-01-18T23:06:13.039-05:00This is the first use of this prompt that I've...This is the first use of this prompt that I've read that has had the child's mother involved. It is noteworthy that she is cared for, even under these conditions. Lovely use of words such as, "Her eyes gentled me."Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-15430602804039859852013-01-18T20:48:45.434-05:002013-01-18T20:48:45.434-05:00I like the dialect you use here. Brings it to life...I like the dialect you use here. Brings it to life. Nice. Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-71190718568159926972013-01-18T16:57:50.787-05:002013-01-18T16:57:50.787-05:00"Haunting" is a good description of your..."Haunting" is a good description of your words too. Beautiful.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-77896930191756104612013-01-18T16:48:57.336-05:002013-01-18T16:48:57.336-05:00That child has eyes with way too much knowledge.That child has eyes with way too much knowledge.Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16666910475457302786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-11964298210338932122013-01-18T13:39:17.690-05:002013-01-18T13:39:17.690-05:00Very nice, with the accent so well done..Very nice, with the accent so well done..PirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.com