tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post1593417114081861456..comments2024-03-19T03:27:24.739-04:00Comments on PattiKen and the Muses: The Suicide Seat, Part 1PattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-50595947455624552872010-09-25T19:57:21.829-04:002010-09-25T19:57:21.829-04:00There is a sense of heaviness...beacuse of the tit...There is a sense of heaviness...beacuse of the title I feel like I know what is coming...and I cant wait to read part 2...xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09510438554332908439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-5696172216390318352010-09-25T02:51:22.699-04:002010-09-25T02:51:22.699-04:00this story builds really nicely --- great pacing -...this story builds really nicely --- great pacing - can't wait to see what's nextAmanda Summerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00942636545948440422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-60270548112128708722010-09-22T22:39:02.591-04:002010-09-22T22:39:02.591-04:00Looking forward to Buenos Aires!Looking forward to Buenos Aires!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-75880125149811447472010-09-21T02:27:20.736-04:002010-09-21T02:27:20.736-04:00I haven't read Part 2 yet, but re teenagers. T...I haven't read Part 2 yet, but re teenagers. They are sensitive to emotional turmoil if not nuance. This is what makes them such a pain in the neck!!Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09513648613788716017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-75837321563753981102010-09-20T23:36:02.088-04:002010-09-20T23:36:02.088-04:00Julie: Touché. My intent was to paint Ben as a tee...Julie: Touché. My intent was to paint Ben as a teenager (key point, that) being raised by a housekeeper since the age of eight. But you are right. I could add more to flesh out the relationship between Ben and his Dad leading up to the fishing trip and Paul's bombshell. Thanks for your input.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-22368939762101900772010-09-20T23:35:34.181-04:002010-09-20T23:35:34.181-04:00Jingle: Thank you, my friend.
Lou: You warm my h...Jingle: Thank you, my friend.<br /><br />Lou: You warm my heart. Thank you.<br /><br />Jeff: Stay tuned...<br /><br />Tom: Thank you. It makes me happy to hear that.<br /><br />Janice: Excellent!PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-27709600053686792972010-09-20T23:24:16.155-04:002010-09-20T23:24:16.155-04:00I come up against 'disconnects' here as I ...I come up against 'disconnects' here as I did in your previous entry. You tug at many heart-strings, but don't allow others in his life to have a rational response. You paint his son as deaf and blind.Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09513648613788716017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-8501776388740295002010-09-19T18:22:51.553-04:002010-09-19T18:22:51.553-04:00I'm hooked...I'm hooked...Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10882248671520480556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-57231455271329321652010-09-19T15:18:09.151-04:002010-09-19T15:18:09.151-04:00The Dead Line to Vote is Sunday or today,
http://j...The Dead Line to Vote is Sunday or today,<br />http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/09/06/the-celebrate-blogger-of-august-awards-announcements/<br /><br />u r nominated, u win 1 vote automatically,<br />if you vote for other bloggers, u win another vote…<br />have fun!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-85543268086155432672010-09-19T10:02:00.303-04:002010-09-19T10:02:00.303-04:00wow. some really good imagery here alongside the s...wow. some really good imagery here alongside the story.Tomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10948978798395906663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-68998539958558515052010-09-18T23:39:49.337-04:002010-09-18T23:39:49.337-04:00Hah!
Between the title and that cliffhanger, I...Hah!<br /><br />Between the title and that cliffhanger, I'm waiting in anticipation.<br /><br />Happy ending? Or sad? Hmm...JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-42644024984794606472010-09-18T23:06:49.991-04:002010-09-18T23:06:49.991-04:00I can't wait to read more.
YOU are a lovely w...I can't wait to read more.<br /><br />YOU are a lovely writer.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-59637728297994352282010-09-18T20:49:27.958-04:002010-09-18T20:49:27.958-04:00a friend near
to save his life,
how dear.
lovely ...a friend near <br />to save his life,<br />how dear.<br />lovely plot,<br />beautiful journey!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-31601221148052490822010-09-18T19:21:33.893-04:002010-09-18T19:21:33.893-04:00Brian: Patiently? Noooo, you're supposed to b...Brian: <i>Patiently?</i> Noooo, you're supposed to be biting your nails and pacing the floor!PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5798063279768967876.post-54507646673331380632010-09-18T19:06:01.181-04:002010-09-18T19:06:01.181-04:00oo la la...nice...running from the bookies...quite...oo la la...nice...running from the bookies...quite the interesting journey you have started for us patti....waiting patiently..Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com